Glow

Critique request from #Traditional-Media:
Lovely work with his eyes and I think the work you did coloring his hair is really good.

I really like his face, it’s well done however his expression is a little bit hard to get, I’m not sure if it’s one of surprise or what, I can’t really tell what his expression is supposed to be.

Overall is nicely drawn but there are a few issues with regards to the coloring, first is not very smooth and looks a little bit rushed especially on his jacket, I’m not sure what media you’re using since you didn’t mention on your description but it looks like colored pencils(let me know if I’m mistaken) and I can see some very clear pencil lines overall the coloring, maybe you should try a different technique, for example coloring with circular motion to get colors to come out more smoothly. Also with regards to coloring I think you should use a more varied palette for coloring, for example using purple and/or blue for shading, it will make it look more interesting, just a suggestion though.

Overall is very nice piece, I really like the hair coloring as well as his eyes, it’s a lovely character. Keep up the good work!